Talk:Destiny (Zero 7 song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 10:17, 6 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments Not much to complain about here. Classic piece of music, too over-used on cheesy TV shows, but hey. On hold, while these trivial issues get sorted. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 15:59, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "The song was written..." It was ... or better still merge those opening very short sentences.
 * "who madly wish" not really encyclopedic in tone.
 * "so desperate for the other's affection that she resorts to watching pornography" I'm not sure of the causality here. Do you mean desperate for physical interaction?
 * " writer Sophie Barker.[7] Barker had" repetitive.
 * Link instrumental.
 * "hey had been searching for." -> " for whom they had been searching"
 * "Hardarker" -> Hardaker?
 * Phrygian mode has an article.
 * Radio 105 has a (very small) article.
 * Simple Things is overlinked.
 * That's all? Wow, I'm stunned. I took care of everything here. I had a little trouble with the sentence about affection, so if it's still unsatisfactory, I'll change it again. ResPM  (T&#x1F508; &#x1F3B5;C) 16:52, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Works for me. Honestly, I usually look to review a bit beyond GA standard and this article easily meets the requirements.  Well done, promoted to GA. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 17:36, 6 March 2021 (UTC)