Talk:Determinism/to do


 * Expand lead section to 2-3 paragraphs


 * Rewrite "Determinism, quantum mechanics and classical physics". The introductory paragraph does not flow well. The entire section is garbled and not up to wikipedia standards on technical subjects. Reads like a magazine article (" Physicist Aaron D. O'Connell explains", "As Stephen Hawking explains") rather than a Wikipedia article.