Talk:Dezinformatsia (book)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K.e.coffman (talk · contribs) 22:13, 8 June 2017 (UTC)

Hi, I will be reviewing the article and will provide feedback in the next couple of days. K.e.coffman (talk) 22:13, 8 June 2017 (UTC)
 * Thank you ! Sagecandor (talk) 22:15, 8 June 2017 (UTC)

Notes -- first pass complete. K.e.coffman (talk) 03:26, 12 June 2017 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your helpful suggestions, I agree with your recommendations and so I've implemented them directly, and noted this with edit summaries of "per GA Review". These are the changes I made in response to your feedback:


 * 1) Removed citations from Background section.
 * 2) Removed notes so as to have one citation per fact in Background section.
 * 3) Split sentence in two - "Specific goals exported by covert Soviet government channels and groups in the Western world financed by Soviet intelligence operations, were coordinated so as to have maximum impact related to ongoing major international incidents".
 * 4) Clarified sentence - "Shultz and Godson note that after the Soviet term disinformation became widely known in the 1980s...".
 * 5) Streamlined the lede to make it more concise.
 * 6) Changed intro to your suggestion - The book was co-authored by Richard H. Shultz, professor of international politics professor at Tufts University, and Roy Godson, professor emeritus of government at Georgetown University.
 * 7) Removed, "It was also reviewed in ...", from the lede.
 * 8) Removed "Shultz and Godson 1984, p. 41", as citations.
 * 9) Removed "The book was reviewed in academic journals including..."
 * 10) Moved additional book reviews into Further reading section.
 * 11) For the 2nd image, added note indicating the provenance of the image, i.e. it comes from a Wiki conference, not from the book.
 * Perhaps now you can have another look and re-evaluate? Sagecandor (talk) 15:41, 12 June 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the work so far. I've updated above & added a couple of comments. K.e.coffman (talk) 03:33, 14 June 2017 (UTC)
 * I've removed all primary source cites from the "Contents summary" section. Can you update again please? Sagecandor (talk) 14:28, 14 June 2017 (UTC)
 * I've expanded the Reception section more. Can you update and let me know your thoughts? Sagecandor (talk) 14:37, 14 June 2017 (UTC)
 * I greatly expanded the Reception section, and added bits to the lede from that, with two more reviews. Look good? Sagecandor (talk) 20:17, 15 June 2017 (UTC)
 * Great improvements! I will be passing the article shortly. K.e.coffman (talk) 01:03, 16 June 2017 (UTC)