Talk:DiMassimo Goldstein

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I created this page and have addressed the issues that have been flagged with it. I removed external links, enhanced its neutrality and linked to it from another page. However, I did not understand the issue of unclear citations. To me, the citations seem clear and direct. Any additional input on what the issues are specifically is appreciated. MelanieWarner (talk) 00:05, 13 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Hello, I added the "unclear citations" tag because the inline external links seemed to be in use as references: they've been removed, and there are currently no references to support several of the clients listed. I've also done some edits to tone down the marketing a bit. May I ask: are you connected with the company? If so, please have a read of WP:Conflict of interest. Thanks, The Mighty Glen (talk) 07:00, 13 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your edits, still learning the Wikipedia process. I added a reference for the clients. I am not affiliated other than having a friend who is friends with Mark DiMassimo and he mentioned they didn't have a page. I love Wikipedia, use it all the time in my research, and want practice at doing pages. Don't know and have never met anyone at the company. MelanieWarner (talk) 23:01, 13 April 2018 (UTC)