Talk:Diary of a Wimpy Kid: The Deep End/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Morgan695 (talk · contribs) 05:56, 4 March 2021 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

Sadly, this nomination quickfails as it does not meet GA standards for breadth of coverage. Over two-thirds of the article's readable prose is a plot summary, with the other sections of the article being incredibly brief; the "Reception" section in particular is only two sentences, and cites only two reviews. (File:Diary of a Wimpy Kid The Deep End cover.png also needs a more substantive fair use rationale, but that's a relatively minor point.) I see that this is your first GAN, so please don't be discouraged by this outcome. The article simply needs to be developed further before it's ready for GA, and I think the best remedy here is to re-nominate the article after you've done that, either through your own edits or by soliciting feedback through a peer review. Morgan695 (talk) 06:11, 4 March 2021 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Thanks for the feedback and the review. I'll keep your feedback in mind for future improvements to the article. Microwavedfork (talk) 06:35, 4 March 2021 (UTC)