Talk:Diary of a Wimpy Kid (book)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ebe123 (talk · contribs) 12:48, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

General

 * Referencing to itself is not necessary. At least put the page numbers.
 * Removed Greg  Heffley   19:17, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

Lead

 * Diary of a Wimpy Kid should be in quotation marks, not italics


 * "The books focuses on Greg's life as he enters middle school and faces many hardships with his family." that sentence is completely redundant to the previous one


 * "The sequel to the book isRodrick Rules." There needs to be a space.


 * 2nd paragraph, name should not be in italics, but in quotation.

✅ ✅
 * "Diary of a Wimpy Kid first appeared on FunBrain.com in 2004. The online book was read 20 million times." You could merge the two sentences.
 * "The sequel to the film is Rodrick Rules" there should be a point.

Plot
✅ Uh what do you mean by "tab" Greg  Heffley   19:17, 3 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Could you merge some paragraphs
 * We do not need a tab after a paragraph.
 * Go here, and you can see it below this note.
 * Ebe 123 → report on my contribs. 20:08, 3 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Ebe 123 → report on my contribs. 20:08, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

✅
 * ✅ Saw that in history.
 * "Not all goes to plan though and when they get home and Greg's dad, who was hassled by kids, throws water at them and the water soaks their candy.The Wizard of Oz play[5] is also a hardship for Greg, Patty Farell, who plays Dorothy, is coming on stage, and since Greg is a Tree, he thinks he can throw apples at her, but the director takes it out for health and safety." After 1st sentence, We need a space.

FunBrain

 * Section to be expanded
 * I think I expanded it enough. Greg  Heffley

✅
 * " The website made daily entries until June 2005. " There should be a slash right before ">" Ebe 123  → report on my contribs. 20:21, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

Development and reception
Merged
 * 2nd paragraph is too short.

Comments
This is on the borderline for speedy fail. I'm putting this on hold for 7 days. Ebe 123 → report on my contribs. 13:57, 3 December 2011 (UTC) I have corrected most of the mistakes said here. Greg  Heffley   19:31, 3 December 2011 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail: