Talk:Dicen Que Soy/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: DivaKnockouts (talk · contribs) 18:20, 18 May 2014 (UTC) I'll take this one off your hands buddy :) —  Diva    Knockouts   18:20, 18 May 2014 (UTC)

Haha, I had a feeling either you or AJona1992 would do the review for this article! ;) Erick (talk) 18:59, 18 May 2014 (UTC)
 * Psh, I saw it (being a India album) and saw you nominated it, so I decided to take it, haha. :) —  Diva    Knockouts   19:50, 18 May 2014 (UTC)

General
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 * The album cover needs alt text.

Introduction
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 * The album was produced by American musician Sergio George, who chose the songs for India to record the emphasis on feminism to suit with her voice. → The album was produced by American musician Sergio George, who chose the songs for India to record emphasis on feminism to suit with her voice.
 * Add a comma after "charts".
 * "In the United States, it peaked at number four and one on the Billboard Top Latin Albums and Tropical Albums charts, respectively, and has..."? I don't think it flows when there's already a comma after "respectively".

Background
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 * Add a comma after "Atlantic Records".
 * Her first recording under the label was a cover of Basilio's song "Vivir lo Nuestro" a duet with Anthony for the RMM compilation album Combinacion Perfecta (1993). → Her first recording under the label was a cover of Basilio's song "Vivir lo Nuestro" duet with Anthony for the RMM compilation album Combinacion Perfecta (1993).
 * Add a comma after "perform", before "despite".

Recording and music style
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 * Could this section be renamed Recording and musical characteristics instead? Music styles seems a bit, you know, plain. (Just a suggestion)
 * Add a comma after "Lupita D'Alessio".
 * Add a comma after "counterbalance".
 * Replace the "In" in "In describing the production..." with "When".
 * "Puerto Rican singer Tito Nieves is featured on the song "No Me Conviene". "Vivir lo Nuestro" was included as a bonus track for the album." — Combine these two sentences with "and".

Singles

 * Everything looks fine here.

Reception

 * Where is the reference for over 144,000 sales as of 2000?
 * FN 23. The same source which talks about sales for salsa albums not being reported. The only reason I put in a note is in case a reader wonders why that's the latest sales I could find for Dicen Que Soy.


 * Otherwise, everything else looks good.
 * Thanks!

Tracklisting

 * Add the parameter for all production credits to Sergio George.
 * Hmm, I'm not so sure. Wouldn't this be more fitting for studio albums that has several tracks done by different producers? I mean, having "George" at the end of each song doesn't seem necessary since it's already established that he's the sole producer of the album.
 * I meant the parameter |all_music=Sergio George. I've added it for you. Feel free to remove it, if you feel it isn't necessary. -  Diva    Knockouts   18:38, 20 May 2014 (UTC)

Chart performance

 * I know it may be hard to find Year-End charts for 2000 and beyond albums, but have you checked?
 * You mean 1994 and 1995? I looked at the 1994 year-end charts and the album wasn't there (not surprising since it was released late in the year) and the 1995 year-end charts isn't available on Google Books so there's nothing I can do about that. :(