Talk:Digging Your Scene/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 07:40, 31 December 2016 (UTC)

Lead

 * as the second single from the parent record → remove "single" here


 * where several of whom agreed it would succeed → with several agreeing it would succeed
 * ✅ – Yes, this is much better :). Carbrera (talk) 16:33, 31 December 2016 (UTC)


 * and number 14 → and at number 14


 * reached number nineteen → reached number 19


 * American band Ivy created a cover → You may better use "recorded" here, as "created" sounds not ok


 * Release year for Guestroom in brackets

Infobox

 * The second release date in the infobox may be overfluous
 * ✅ – I forgot to remove it before nominating it ;). Carbrera (talk) 16:33, 31 December 2016 (UTC)

Composition and lyrics

 * with influence from from → one "from" is enough ;)


 * he worries: "Tell me → : to ,


 * Release year for She Was Only a Grocer's Daughter in brackets


 * He wrote: "Dr. Robert → : to ,

Critical reception

 * a programmer for Billboard → a programmer from Billboard


 * that its sound → state "the song" or smth else here as you're introducing a new subtopic

Chart performance

 * In the lead, you say the single peaked at number 19 in the UK


 * second highest peaking single → second-highest peaking single


 * number 5 → only numbers up to ten are written like this; number five


 * also peaked at number sixteen → also peaked at number 16


 * number 7 mark → number seven mark


 * thirteenth week on Canada's → 13th week on Canada's


 * numbers sixteen → numbers 16


 * twenty-five and twenty-three → 25 and 23

Music video

 * was released sometime in 1986 → remove "sometime"; 1986 is enough here


 * Music & Media Conference, that took place → no comma here

Track listings and formats

 * flawless ;)

Charts

 * flawless ;)

Release history

 * use "rowspan="2" for RCA

Promotion and use in media

 * This section should be moved after "Music video"


 * other is flawless ;)

Background and development

 * coos lines like: "I'm like a boy → : to ,

Infobox

 * Isn't there any cover for this version?
 * That's weird, isn't it? Ivy's official catalog lists it as a CD single, but with my educated guess it may have been packaged with a similar cover as seen on "Edge of the Ocean". However, since I can't find any confirmation I'm not gonna add an image :(.

Critical reception

 * version. He wrote: "Durand's → version, writing, "Durand's


 * so natural...if you → ... to [...]

Track listing

 * flawless ;)

Release history

 * flawless ;)

Copy-violation

 * 9.9% is super!

Images

 * Perfectly illustrated by images ;)

Links

 * No problems here!

Outcome

 * for 7 days! Good luck, Cartoon network freak (talk) 08:35, 31 December 2016 (UTC)
 * Wow you're fast! Thanks so much again for the review. Always is appreciated. Carbrera (talk) 16:33, 31 December 2016 (UTC)


 * Gladly passing! Cartoon network freak (talk) 16:58, 31 December 2016 (UTC)