Talk:Diggy Down/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 19:49, 27 August 2016 (UTC)

Comments

 * The single cover art is unfortunately quite pixelated; a better version of the image that is sized well for Wikipedia is available here
 * Can you upload the new version of it? Something doesn't work for me :)


 * I would prefer "from the album Inna and Body and the Sun" instead of its current option with the forward slash "/"


 * Since "Empire Music" is listed first in the lead, I would recommend listing it first in the infobox as well


 * Remove "on the track." in the second sentence


 * "An accompanying music video for the recording was uploaded on 9 December 2014 onto Inna's YouTube channel, with it being shot by Michael Mircea in Bucharest, Romania." --> "An accompanying music video for the recording was uploaded on 9 December 2014 onto Inna's YouTube channel, and was shot by Michael Mircea in Bucharest, Romania."


 * "Acclaim" in the lead and "mostly favorable reviews" in the article are a bit contradicting


 * "defensing the position" --> "claiming the position"


 * "for which the band acts as a featured artist on the song.[1][2]" --> "for which the band is credited as a featured artist.[1][2]"


 * The link to "Direct Lyrics" is a redirect


 * Remove the link to "saxophone" as it's a pretty common term


 * Any other reviews for the track? Two is a fairly small :(
 * ❌ Sorry, there are no others :(


 * "defensing the position" --> "claiming the position" again


 * "most-aired Romanian song" --> "most-played Romanian song"


 * "most-aired song" --> "most-played song"


 * "With this occasion, it was revealed that—according to Media Forest's measurements in the first half of 2015—"Diggy Down" was the most aired song on Romanian radio, with its music video as well leading the chart with visuals played the most on Romanian television; they received 4,216 and 5,520 total spins, respectively.[14]" --> Quite long; you could break this up into two sentences


 * "The release of "Diggy Down" and its accompanying music video was previewed on 20 November 2014 through a teaser uploaded by Inna on her YouTube channel,[16] following which the visual was released on 9 December 2014 through the same means.[17]" --> Also quite long


 * "following which the visual was released on 9 December 2014 through the same means.[17]" --> "The full video was released on 9 December 2014 through the same platform.[17]"


 * "floates" --> "floats"


 * "The Pussycat Dolls' "Buttons" (2006).[3]" --> "The Pussycat Dolls' 2006 single "Buttons".[3]"


 * "eventually losing the distinction to the latter music video.[22]" --> This is technically incorrect since Inna never had the award/distinction to begin with


 * The track listing you display is a bit confusing as it seems all four were included on a CD or digital download, when the sources appear otherwise.


 * Any credits or personnel available?
 * ❌ It isn't a big deal to include them, as they're only producing at music video credits, which are already introduced in the article's body.


 * Use the sort option in the charts so the reader can view the peaks from highest to lowest and vice-versa


 * ""Diggy Down" was simultaneously released to European digital outlets through Empire Music and Roton on 15 December 2014." --> Only a few sources are needed here; six is a bit too many


 * "On 24 July 2015, the song was finally made available for consumption in the United States by the same means.[26]" --> "On 24 July 2015, the song was made available for purchase in the United States by the same means.[26]"


 * "vocal collaboration" --> "vocals"


 * No dead links Good work!
 * THX

On hold until changes have been made. Thank you. Carbrera (talk) 20:10, 27 August 2016 (UTC)
 * All done! THX very much for the review. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:52, 27 August 2016 (UTC)