Talk:Digital HiNote/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:55, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 15:47, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
 * One-sentence lead is insufficient.
 * And citations can be in the main body as everything in the lead should be covered and referenced in the main prose.
 * I think it's reasonable to link laptop, desktop and tower in this context.
 * "color passive-matrix LCDs or color active-matrix LCDs" link these technologies.
 * "hard drive ... 120 to 340 MB. ... 3.5 inch floppy drive" link all these.
 * "inch floppy disk drive underneath" link first time.
 * " 4 lb and measured only an inch high" convert to metric.
 * "1998 they left" I would comma after 1998.
 * "wrote in CNET that" on CNET?
 * Don't auto-collapse the table.
 * It looks like you're forcing the table width to 100%, why do that?
 * No need for small text.
 * Date formats in refs should be consistently formatted.
 * unless we start seeing progress on this in the next few days I'm afraid I'll have to fail it. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 15:32, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
 * @The Rambling Man Sorry, I completely forgot about this nomination. I'll work on it. PhotographyEdits (talk) 13:17, 22 September 2021 (UTC)
 * five days have passed since you left that note, but I don't believe any progress has been made. I'll archive this nomination shortly if nothing is done.  Cheers. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 07:30, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
 * @The Rambling Man ✅, please let me know if there is anything missing. Sorry for the delay. PhotographyEdits (talk) 19:46, 28 September 2021 (UTC)