Talk:Dil Chahta Hai/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:57, 24 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Add WP:ALT text to every image in this article.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:07, 25 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Box Office India says the budget was ₹140 million.
 * I found this discussion several weeks ago, in which Box Office India is deemed not accurate for budget estimation. --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:07, 25 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "Dil Chahta Hai was based on Akhtar's diary about his trips to Mumbai and New York City in 1996 and a story by a friend of his" "Dil Chahta Hai was based on Akhtar's diary, detailing his trips to Mumbai and New York City in 1996, and a story by a friend of his"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:07, 25 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Plot summary = 438 words passes WP:FILMPLOT
 * "he is loves her" "he loves her"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:07, 25 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "After the principal photography had already commenced in 2000" "After principal photography commenced in 2000"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:07, 25 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "he told them that screenplay" "he told them that the screenplay" or "he told them that that screenplay"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:07, 25 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "inspired from" "inspired by"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:07, 25 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Remove the comma after "the role of Sid".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:07, 25 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "as well as image of himself" – reword
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:07, 25 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "which she referred as" "which she referred to as"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:07, 25 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Add "the" before "33rd International Film Festival".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:07, 25 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Mark references from The Hindu with "|url-access=subscription".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:07, 25 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Is the external link to Rotten Tomatoes (with only 3 reviews) necessary?
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:07, 25 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Those are my notes. Great work. Ping me when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:29, 25 July 2021 (UTC)