Talk:Dinara Asanova

== Eliza McKenna Peer Review ==

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The way the information was portrayed had was amazing, it added a lot to the page itself while not changing the tone. Although, the paragraphs do not seem consistent in terms of how to content is delivered. So tweaking the present words a bit, so it flows with your words.

This does not take away from the fact that a lot of new content has been brought to the page, which is great since it seems that it came from scholarly journals.

Two items stood out to me and that was the career and filmography that was added to the Dinara Asanova page since she is not that well known in the West.

Maybe something to add would be a sentence from Dinara Asanova from an interview possibly, just to know what influenced her to join the film industry. Or even a mention of her personal life. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Eliza Mckenna (talk • contribs) 04:09, 6 November 2018 (UTC)

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Marliethefilmcritic. Peer reviewers: Ravens NN, Eliza Mckenna.

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