Talk:Diplobune/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wolverine XI (talk · contribs) 06:48, 19 March 2024 (UTC)

Comments
Will get to this later today. Wolverine XI  ( talk to me ) 06:48, 19 March 2024 (UTC)


 * Looks like you'll be around for reviewing anoplotheriid articles, eh? Well, hope you'll be around for Dacrytherium's review sometime, heh. On a serious note, thanks for reviewing this. PrimalMustelid (talk) 08:50, 20 March 2024 (UTC)
 * No, I'll only be around to review this article. I'm a busy man with things to do. Wolverine XI   ( talk to me ) 15:21, 20 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Reviewing now. Wolverine XI   ( talk to me ) 08:05, 23 March 2024 (UTC)

Review

 * For the first sentence, remove, then start a new sentence
 * Separated into different sentences. PrimalMustelid (talk) 12:01, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
 * ? Funny choice of words
 * Perhaps, but it's a standard term for creating a taxon. PrimalMustelid (talk) 12:01, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Wrong choice of words, please rephrase
 * Changed to "based on his hypothesis of the taxon being..." PrimalMustelid (talk) 12:01, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Promoted?
 * Changed to "elevated." PrimalMustelid (talk) 12:01, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
 * today => currently
 * Implemented. PrimalMustelid (talk) 12:01, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Semicolon
 * Done. PrimalMustelid (talk) 12:01, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
 * hint towards a life => suggests a life
 * Done. PrimalMustelid (talk) 12:01, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
 * for the purpose of climbing them => for climbing
 * Changed. PrimalMustelid (talk) 12:01, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Of a species doesn't make sense here.
 * Changed to "of the studied species." PrimalMustelid (talk) 12:01, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
 * We don't care what he felt. Rephrase this please.
 * Changed to "Because of the molar morphologies being similar to those of..." PrimalMustelid (talk) 12:01, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
 * For the section "skull", if you don't have an image of Diplobune, please don't show skulls of other groups.
 * Removed, not the biggest fan though since the skull of Anoplotherium is similar enough and none of the Diplobune skull images are available for CC licensing/public domain. PrimalMustelid (talk) 12:01, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Slightly shorten the sections on "skull", "limbs" and "brain"
 * Cut down on some less important details in the three subsections. The "limbs" section is long still, but I believe the information I left for morphologies and articulation are important for the "no analogue" component of Diplobune and the arboreal hypothesis stemming from its anatomy. PrimalMustelid (talk) 12:01, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Please remove the image of Anoplotherium in "Late Eocene"
 * I don't think it's much problematic since readers may prefer having a contemporary fauna image being displayed. PrimalMustelid (talk) 12:01, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
 * References look typical for a Paleontology article

OK, ; I am done. Wolverine XI  ( talk to me ) 08:43, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Implemented most of your suggestions. PrimalMustelid (talk) 12:01, 23 March 2024 (UTC)