Talk:Diplomatic Reception Rooms, U.S. Department of State

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This page reads like the brochure from which I'm sure it was copied. I would rewrite it myself, but that would probably just mask the flaw... does anyone know enough about the subject to re-write it properly?


 * I agree about the "brochure" tone of the article. Not sure how to correct it or what else would be worth adding(A list of curators?). Factually the current article seems to be correct. I did work in the Rooms for three or four years in the late '90s. One Skunk Todd (talk) 19:51, 5 August 2010 (UTC)


 * Appreciate the comments and suggestions - (MFA HST Washington DC (talk) 16:51, 12 January 2011 (UTC))