Talk:Disappointed (Ivy song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: HĐ (talk · contribs) 11:35, 7 May 2016 (UTC)

Lead ✅ ✅ ✅
 * became available exclusively → sounds weird, try "was released exclusively" or some sort of thing
 * link music critics
 * music critics, who

Background ✅ ✅
 * Songwriting and production for Long Distance took several years for Ivy to finalize → Try "It took several years for... to finalize..."
 * When was the album released that the songs were "several years old"?

Promotion ✅
 * "In promotion for" → bizarre


 * The rest of the article is GA-worthy.
 * for seven days. — Simon (talk) 09:21, 11 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Once again, I changed the article accordingly. Thank you for the nice comments. Carbrera (talk) 03:29, 14 May 2016 (UTC)