Talk:Disney bomb/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer:  Sp33dyphil  "Ad astra" 03:19, 22 June 2011 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * full name for "UK" in info box. Yes check.svg Done. --Alberto Fernandez Fernandez (talk) 15:45, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
 * italise "aircraft" next to "Launch platform". Yes check.svg Done. --Alberto Fernandez Fernandez (talk) 15:45, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
 * why isn't "Disney Swish" boldened? Any reason for its being italicised? Yes check.svg Done. --Alberto Fernandez Fernandez (talk) 15:45, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
 * "hardened, concrete" "conventional" "A Disney bomb, just after release" no need for commas Yes check.svg Done.Catsmeat (talk) 20:40, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
 * "targets such" missing comma after "targets". Yes check.svg Done. Chris857 (talk) 23:27, 22 June 2011 (UTC)


 * Description and development
 * "During World War II" change to "During the Second World War" since the latter style is used at article's start. Yes check.svg Done. Catsmeat (talk) 20:40, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Reference for third and fourth paragraphs? Yes check.svg Partially done, one reference added.Catsmeat (talk) 20:40, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
 * ✅--Alberto Fernandez Fernandez (talk) 13:10, 27 June 2011 (UTC)


 * "accelerating the bomb by around " replace "by" with "from"Yes check.svg Reworded and clarified.Catsmeat (talk) 08:21, 23 June 2011 (UTC)
 * huge chunk of text at the end of the fifth paragraph unsourced.
 * ✅ --Alberto Fernandez Fernandez (talk) 13:10, 27 June 2011 (UTC)


 * merge the second last and last paragraphs. Yes check.svg Done.Catsmeat (talk) 20:40, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Is someone going to do anything regarding the "Citation needed" templates?  Sp33dyphil  "Ad astra" 08:15, 9 July 2011 (UTC)
 * ✅--Alberto Fernandez Fernandez (talk) 18:15, 10 July 2011 (UTC)


 * Testing and deployment
 * "The 92nd Bombardment Group, was" "a large, German, concrete" no need for commas.Yes check.svg Done. Catsmeat (talk) 20:21, 24 June 2011 (UTC)
 * "Testing of the Disney Bombs" remove capital letter. Yes check.svg Done.Catsmeat (talk) 20:40, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
 * " The resulting damage" replace "resulting" with "resultant" Yes check.svg Done.Catsmeat (talk) 20:40, 22 June 2011 (UTC)


 * Combat
 * "On the 4th of April 1945" "On the 30 March" "on the 27 of March" See WP:DATE Yes check.svg Done.Catsmeat (talk) 20:40, 22 June 2011 (UTC)


 * Images, referencing and miscellany
 * please add alt text. See WP:ALT Yes check.svg Done. Catsmeat (talk) 21:20, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
 * File:Disney Bomb Diagram.png and File:Victoryairpowerstill.png are text sandwiching.
 * ref pages should be tightened to "p. PAGE NUMBER", instead of "pg. PAGE NUMBER".Yes check.svg Done. --Alberto Fernandez Fernandez (talk) 15:45, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
 * date of publication should follow author's surname without brackets. eg. "Jackson 2004, p. 123".Yes check.svg Done. --Alberto Fernandez Fernandez (talk) 15:45, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Why's there a large quote for the last source of "Bibliography"? Ment to be incorporated into the article. Removed Yes check.svg Done.
 * Used Template:harvnb for the references --Alberto Fernandez Fernandez (talk) 15:45, 22 June 2011 (UTC)

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Article is in great shape, so I wouldn't mind passing it. With a few tweaks here and there, and if the prose can possibly be improved, the article will be a big chance comes FAC. Finally, I'd like someone to do me a favour in return – please review one of my GA nominations, they are Lockheed YF-22 and  Sp33dyphil  "Ad astra" 00:39, 11 July 2011 (UTC)
 * End note