Talk:Dispute between Darnhall and Vale Royal Abbey/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 08:12, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  08:12, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
 * 1
 * 1.a ✅
 * 1.b ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a ✅
 * 2.b ✅
 * 2.c ✅
 * 2.d ✅ (16% is highest, due to both having source names and a few incidental parallels.)
 * 3
 * 3.a ✅
 * 3.b ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a ✅
 * 5
 * 5.a ✅
 * 6
 * 6.a ✅
 * 6.b ✅
 * No DAB links ✅
 * No Dead links ✅

Lead

 * I would expand the lead if possible.
 * but repeatedly failed to persuade the abbot or the King suggest but despite repeated attempts, were unable to persuade either the abbot or the King

Background

 * The revolt of Darnhall and Over was thus one of many villein uprisings before the Peasants' Revolt of June 1381. suggest The revolt of Darnhall and Over was thus one of many small villein uprisings before the Peasants' Revolt of June 1381.


 * That is all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  16:26, 6 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks as ever —yes the lead did need a little something :) sorted now, I think. Cheers!   ...SerialNumber  54129 ...speculates 18:53, 6 March 2018 (UTC)