Talk:Dissolved load

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Tsilas3. Peer reviewers: Rsoni22.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 19:37, 16 January 2022 (UTC)

References Need To Be Checked
Hi... just an FYI, the reference link which is currently listed points to a page which has been moved. Update when possible. -- Oliver Twisted  04:50, 17 December 2008 (UTC)
 * My typo - fixed. Awickert (talk) 05:09, 17 December 2008 (UTC)

Article evaluation
The current article does not have much information in it. There is a short introductory paragraph which gives the definition, and then introduces several advanced scientific topics. As a result, the article is full of scientific jargon, which makes it hard to read. There is also a section about salt export, but the table in that section has the dissolved load of several major rivers, not the salt export. That section could be relevant to the topic of dissolved load, but it isn't explained, and it seems to distract from the rest of the article. As a whole, this article needs a lot of work. It needs more information, it has to be presented without jargon, and it needs to be better organized. Tsilas3 (talk) 17:18, 2 September 2018 (UTC)