Talk:Dive Bar Tour (Lady Gaga)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: GagaNutella (talk · contribs) 17:34, 6 March 2023 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your review! :) I’ve addressed all your notes. Sricsi (talk) 09:56, 7 March 2023 (UTC)

Infobox/Lead

 * Add a comma after previous tours

Background and development

 * Gaga aimed to be close enough to her audience so that she can look into their eyes while performing, → Gaga aimed to be close enough to her audience to be able to look into their eyes while performing,
 * The "Prior the tour" part, change will for would

Concert synopsis

 * Remove the comma after sat down
 * who served as co-executive producer for Joanne. → who served as Joanne'''s co-executive producer.
 * telling the audience how they wrote the following song "Grigio Girls" together, which Gaga → telling the public how they wrote the following song, "Grigio Girls", together,
 * and was present in the audience. → and was present there.
 * "Million Reasons" and "Just Another Day" was performed → "Million Reasons" and "Just Another Day" were performed
 * where she reprised "Joanne" and performed → where she reprised "Joanne" and sang
 * Gaga debuted new song → Gaga debuted the new song
 * the track "Million Reasons", and performed the song. → the track "Million Reasons" and performed it.
 * she sang "Angel Down", and changed up the lyrics to reference → she sang "Angel Down" and changed its lyrics to reference
 * Talking about her family led to a performance of the track "Joanne". → Talking about her family led to a performance of "Joanne".
 * Before performing the final song, → Before singing the final song,
 * Remove the comma after crowd-surfed

Critical reception

 * and while she believed that → while believing that

Shows

 * Wikilink United States

Final comments and verdict
I think this is it. until all of the issues are fixed.
 * ✅ now. Gaga Nutella talk 13:10, 7 March 2023 (UTC)