Talk:Diversity (business)/Archives/2015

Article lacks coherence
As I read the article now in July 2015, it strikes me as having several sections that are not well connected to each other. That is, there is not a strong thread linking the sections together. If somebody is willing and qualified, we will all be grateful for a rewrite that ties this article together better.Pete unseth (talk) 17:46, 1 July 2015 (UTC)