Talk:Divine Intervention (Slayer album)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: -- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   01:15, 5 November 2010 (UTC)

Lead

 * the first Slayer album featuring -> their first
 * Several of the songs on the album were inspired by television -> what does this mean?
 * The production posed as a challenge to the record company, as its marketing situation drew arguments -> If your going to write that you need to tell us why. You just made a statement and cut us off
 * Vocalist -> vocalist
 * said that the production was paid more attention -> ?
 * The cover was painted and designed by Wes Benscoter, who was filmed while doing his work -> not well-written

Overall

 * This article has allot of grammar issues and should be thoroughly re-written. Additionally, there is no chart even though it did enter the charts in some countries. The personnel section is not sourced. There is no "Chart performance section"
 * This article needs allot of work.-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   04:21, 24 November 2010 (UTC)