Talk:Diwali (The Office)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 04:15, 19 July 2012 (UTC)

General

 * No dab links. Great work!
 * No dead links. Great work!
 * The rationale for the image needs to be expanded
 * I agree. I've removed it, as the rationale was insufficient and the resolution was too large.

Infobox

 * Add "running time"
 * Done


 * "List of The Office (U.S. TV series) episodes" → List of The Office (U.S.) episodes"
 * List of The Office (U.S. TV series) episodes is the correct link; List of The Office (U.S.) episodes is a red link

Lede

 * Unlink television series per WP:OVERLINK
 * Done


 * Explain what a "rating" is. Nielsen ratings, etc.
 * The lead is meant to be brief; I've added a link to Nielsen Media Research to help readers, but don't think anything else is needed here

Synopsis

 * bicycle to work → bikes to work
 * Done


 * Unlink text message per WP:OVERLINK
 * Done

Production

 * Nothing is there

Reception

 * Explain what a "rating" is. Nielsen ratings, etc.
 * Similar to above. I've added a link to Nielsen Media Research and changed "ratings" to "ratings share". Otherwise, I think everything is sufficiently explained (4.2 percent of all 18-49 yr olds etc).


 * Television Without Pity graded the episode with an A → Television Without Pity gave the episode wih an "A" grade
 * Done