Talk:Dizzy Gillespie

How is there no mention of Chico O'Farrill?
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chico_O%27Farrill — Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.205.3.184 (talk • contribs) 22:45, 26 April 2016‎ (UTC)

Removed multiple possessive pronouns
I removed all "hises" but the first from the opening sentence of "His beret and horn-rimmed spectacles, his scat singing, his bent horn, pouched cheeks, and his light-hearted personality provided some of bebop's most prominent symbols." Could anyone please tell me if it's okay to list something like "his table, his chair, and his lamp" in a sentence, or if it's more acceptable to just use the possessive pronoun once? Also, sorry to be passive-aggressive to whoever wrote that sentences, or just the "hises", in my edit note. I originally wrote a version of this on the help desk, but then deleted it when I realized it would be better to ask it here first, since other users have told me to do that and this page seems to indicate that I should.--Thylacine24 (talk) 16:46, 18 April 2021 (UTC)