Talk:Djibouti at the 2000 Summer Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: CycloneIsaac (talk · contribs) 04:12, 1 January 2017 (UTC)

Reviewing later.&mdash; CycloneIsaac ( Talk ) 04:12, 1 January 2017 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

A few minor mistakes...
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * See below.
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * Citations are inconsistent. Some dates have different formats and some publishers are missing in some citations. Use the "External links" link in the "GA Toolbox" sidebar to find the mistakes.
 * ✅--Cameron11598 (Talk) 23:27, 1 January 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * Expanded recently (Beginning on January 1).
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Comments

 * Soul -> Seoul
 * ✅ --Cameron11598 (Talk) 23:27, 1 January 2017 (UTC)
 * Be consistent with the linking of the cities (Seoul and Barcelona).
 * ✅ --Cameron11598 (Talk) 23:32, 1 January 2017 (UTC)
 * "As of 2000" is kinda redundant.
 * ✅ --Cameron11598 (Talk) 23:34, 1 January 2017 (UTC)
 * "She set a new record for her nation upon competing, being the youngest athlete to represent Djibouti, at the age of 16 years and 162 days.[7] She was also the first female to represent Djibouti in the Olympic games.[8] She competed in the second heat of the women's 800 metres on 22 September. She finished last in the heat of eight athletes, with a time of two minutes and 31.74 seconds." More sentence variety needed (at least don't started consecutive sentences with "She").
 * ✅ --Cameron11598 (Talk) 23:36, 1 January 2017 (UTC)
 * Fixed everything --Cameron11598 (Talk) 23:38, 1 January 2017 (UTC)