Talk:Djibouti at the 2008 Summer Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Good888 (talk · contribs) 15:20, 17 October 2014 (UTC)

Well I have had a read of this article and I can see very few issues in this article:


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. Has an appropriate reference section:
 * B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:

Well either this is a good article or I am rubbish at reviewing articles. And comparing this to other "at the 2008 Summer Olympics" articles, I think it's the former. Nonetheless, I did find a couple of issues:

Lead section
 * "Djibouti's only Olympic medalist, was selected as the flag bearer for both the opening and closing ceremonies despite not competing in 2008." - Link flag bearer to List of flag bearers for Djibouti at the Olympics. That way, we don't need the See also section.

Athletics
 * Merge both the Men's and Women's competition sections together. No need to have them separate in my opinion.
 * "Competing at her first olympics" - cap Olympics.
 * "Feraez was 3.16 seconds behind the fastest athlete and 0.48 seconds behind the slowest athlete who progressed to the semi-finals, Thi Huong Vu." - after this sentence, perhaps you can add "Therefore, she did not advance to later rounds." Either that or something similar.

See also
 * See above. No need for this section.

Going to promote once these issues are sorted. Nice job. good888 (talk) 15:20, 17 October 2014 (UTC)


 * , thanks for the review, I've done all your changes -  NickGibson3900 Talk 02:38, 18 October 2014 (UTC)
 * , as promised, I am going to promote this to GA class. good888 (talk) 08:19, 18 October 2014 (UTC)