Talk:Djibouti at the 2012 Summer Paralympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:57, 14 April 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing this as part of a GA sweep. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 07:57, 14 April 2018 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
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 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
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Lead

 * Mention Hassan in the lead
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "He did poorly in his heat due to an ankle injury, and did not win a medal." - and despite not winning a medal, he was cheered on by the crowd as he ran alone on the track for two laps.
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  

Background

 * "The event was from August 29 to September 9." - The event was held from August 29 to September 9.
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "The country had one athlete compete, in the men's 1500m T46." - 1500 meters
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  

Athletics

 * Is there any information that states how Hassan qualified for the Paralympics? Is so, that would be useful to have in the article.
 * I tried English and French Google, but neither returned anything. Do you have any good places to look?  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "competed in the men's 1,500m T46" - same issue as in the background section
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * You should add the mention of the ankle injury Hassan sustained in this section as you have done in the lede
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * "Hassan finished with a time of 11:23.50, a season best." - try: Hassan finished the race with a season-best time of 11:23.50.
 * Done  Kees08  (Talk)