Talk:Doctor Who series 10/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 01:44, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 01:44, 4 March 2021 (UTC)
 * , thank you for your review! I believe I've covered all of the changes requested. -- / Alex /21  02:22, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good but I would recommend improving the poster's non-free use rationale with this template.
 * Remove the comma after "revival in 2005".
 * Add a comma after "Toby Whithouse".
 * Remove the comma after "worked on the show".
 * Add a comma after "plots".
 * ✅ -- / Alex /21  01:45, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

Episodes

 * Remove the comma after "aliens' ship".
 * Remove the comma after "investigates the puddle".
 * "crew were inefficient" "crew was inefficient"
 * "which leads" "that leads"
 * Remove the comma after "Time Lord technology".
 * Add a comma after "Chinese".
 * Remove the comma after "offers his consent".
 * Remove the comma after "another solution".
 * Add a comma in between "however the".
 * "humanity recall" "humanity recalls"
 * Add a comma after "The Doctor, Bill".
 * Add a comma after "The Doctor, Nardole".
 * Remove the comma after "fights off the Cybermen".
 * Remove the comma after "body back to his TARDIS".
 * Remove the comma after "attempts to stop it".
 * Add a comma after "displaced, confused".
 * The summaries of "The Pilot", "Extremis", "The Eaters of Light", "World Enough and Time", "The Doctor Falls", and "Twice Upon a Time" need to have less than 200 words.
 * ✅ -- / Alex /21  02:14, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

Casting

 * The second reference after "Radio Times" is missing a website parameter.
 * Can the four references after "first episode of the series" be distributed?
 * Mark the only source after "every episode" as dead.
 * The citation after "episode of Doctor Who" doesn't mention the series.
 * Add a comma after "Aleksandar Jovanovic".
 * Mark the reference after "Missy in the series" as dead.
 * ✅ -- / Alex /21  02:21, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

Production

 * Add a comma after "6 March 2017".
 * Remove the comma after "12 June 2017".
 * Remove the comma after "filming of Class".
 * ✅ -- / Alex /21  01:45, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

Release

 * Add a comma after "On 13 March 2017".
 * Add a comma after "Mackie, Moffat".
 * Add a comma after "Mackie, Lucas".
 * Add a comma after "Capaldi, Mackie".
 * "less episodes" "fewer episodes"
 * "United States and Canada" "the United States, and Canada"
 * Add a comma after "16 April in Australia".
 * ✅ -- / Alex /21  01:45, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

Reception

 * Every section here looks good.

Soundtrack

 * No issues here.