Talk:Doctor Who series 9/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 22:12, 17 November 2020 (UTC)

Hey, I'll be reviewing this article. I'll have my assessment by tomorrow. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 22:12, 17 November 2020 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

 * Infobox and the article's lead are great. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 14:09, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Episode descriptions are well-written. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 14:09, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
 * I've noticed that the other GA-articles on the series also have a separate "Casting" section, so that's good. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 14:09, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
 * In development, I'm not quite sure why the word "cliffhanger" is linked until its third use, so I suggest removing the link, and adding it to its first use in the sentence: "Before series 8 began, Moffat promised a cliffhanger for series 9". Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 14:09, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
 * In writing, "Flatline" should be linked to its article as it's in a new section. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 14:09, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Also in writing, could you add a reference to support the sentence ending with: "though this was removed at a later date"? Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 14:09, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
 * The filming section is consistent so that passes. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 14:09, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
 * The section titled "Broadcast" should be expanded per MOS:TVRELEASE. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 14:09, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Home media, print, reception, critical response, awards, and soundtrack sections all pass criteria found in MOS:TV. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 14:09, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ Linking "cliffhanger" fixed.
 * ✅ Linking "Flatline" fixed.
 * ✅ Added source to "though this was removed at a later date" sentence. The source is the same one used to source the first half of the same sentence, but at a future archive date (four days later), showing its removal.
 * Fixing Broadcast section.
 * -- / Alex /21  04:38, 22 November 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ Expanded Broadcast section.
 * All issues fixed. -- / Alex /21  05:22, 22 November 2020 (UTC)