Talk:Dolphin D. Overton/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jim Sweeney (talk · contribs) 22:09, 7 December 2011 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Comments

 * One image has a problem File:Dolph Overton 2009.JPG
 * Already fixed that. I assumed the bot would take the template down. Done. — Ed! (talk) 19:44, 9 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Some disamb links need attention Number 13, Distinguished Flying Cross, Tail number,  Captain (military) (redirect page) and Captain
 * Fixed. — Ed! (talk) 20:42, 9 December 2011 (UTC)
 * In the First Korean War tour section Overton flew 102 combat missions over the course of a 6-month year tour. whats a 6 month year tour and should it be six
 * Fixed. — Ed! (talk) 20:42, 9 December 2011 (UTC)
 * In the Second Korean War tour section He also believed any number with a three in it, including the number 13. - is there something missing off the end of the sentence
 * Fixed. — Ed! (talk) 20:42, 9 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Note 2 needs a cite
 * Fixed. — Ed! (talk) 20:42, 9 December 2011 (UTC)


 * Well done, interesting guy, just a few small points. Jim Sweeney (talk) 19:52, 9 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your review! — Ed! (talk) 20:42, 9 December 2011 (UTC)