Talk:Domboshaba

This article needs editing
This article needs editing for grammar, repetition of pictures, and redundant use of phases and ideas. Suggest removing pictures that are posted more than once. Suggest editing each section to remove sentences that repeat explanations with the section and to have more concise word use, then editing for grammar to include inflections and noun-verb tense agreement. Also recommend editing repetition of verbs and nouns for more natural English phrasing. 2603:8082:1200:15:513D:4CE3:CABD:5230 (talk) 14:46, 27 October 2022 (UTC)