Talk:Dominic Olejniczak/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Harrias (talk · contribs) 17:04, 11 May 2023 (UTC)

I'll take a look at this shortly. Harrias (he/him) • talk 17:04, 11 May 2023 (UTC)

Images

 * 6a. Symbol delete vote.svg I can't see any justification for the license tag used. It claims that the image was "published in the United States between 1928 and 1977, inclusive, without a copyright notice" – but the link is to an online image that clearly was not published before 1977 (because, you know, the internet didn't exist then). Unless evidence can be provided that this image was published before 1977 with no copyright notice, we can't use it.
 * Symbol confirmed.svg (As image has been removed.)
 * 6b. Symbol confirmed.svg Image used is appropriate and suitably captioned.

Prose

 * 1a. Symbol confirmed.svg Some notes below, nothing major.
 * There's a few mis-spellings of his surname in the ''City government' section.
 * Wikilink alderman, as you've done for mayor.
 * From what I can see, this is from 1950 until his death in 1989: 39 years. I think it is a stretch to call 39 almost 50. How about "almost 40 years"?
 * This uses two different tenses: "he hired", "would win", "saw ... grow". For consistency, switch the middle one from "would win" to "won".
 * The "in city history" bit is redundant, and can be removed.
 * This feels like it is duplicating the information given in the previous section without adding much of importance, and can probably be removed.
 * Consider using something like  to give  for context.
 * This seems like it is missing a word.
 * Explain what "(1–10–1)" means.
 * 1b. Symbol confirmed.svg No relevant MOS issues.


 * 3a. Symbol confirmed.svg All okay, the subject is covered well. Consider adding some more on his personality, which a few of the sources cover, but it isn't required for GA.
 * 3b. Symbol confirmed.svg The article does not go into excessive detail.
 * 4. Symbol confirmed.svg No issues.
 * 5. Symbol confirmed.svg No issues.

That's a wrap I think. Harrias (he/him) • talk 09:56, 26 May 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks, I think I have resolved all your comments. On the photo, I removed it for now to not hold up the nom. I'll continue to do some research, and if all else fails, I will probably claim fair use since he is long deceased and a free alternative is unlikely to ever be found. « Gonzo fan2007  (talk)  @ 16:24, 26 May 2023 (UTC)
 * Looks good to me. I reckon you'd be able to find an image in one of the contemporary newspapers with no copyright notice, if nothing else. Passing now. Harrias  (he/him) • talk 20:24, 26 May 2023 (UTC)