Talk:Don't Let Me Down (Leona Lewis song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: DivaKnockouts (talk · contribs) 00:31, 17 March 2013 (UTC)

Review

 * Background and development
 * The internet leak subsection is outdated. Were there any other developments following? The section makes it seem like the investigation is still under procedure. Did they catch the hackers? If not then, isn't that worth noting?
 * I don't think so. —  AARON  &bull; TALK   12:34, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
 * That doesn't answer the above. —  Diva    Knockouts   18:20, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
 * I don't think it's outdated. —  AARON  &bull; TALK   18:29, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
 * The most recent reference in the subsection is from 2009. I suggest a sentence be added explaining that the hackers were never caught or something similar closing the discussion. As of right now it just seems open and weird. —  Diva    Knockouts   18:39, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
 * We don't know if they were caught. —  AARON  &bull; TALK   20:25, 17 March 2013 (UTC)


 * Fair enough. Passed. —  Diva    Knockouts   20:35, 17 March 2013 (UTC)


 * Recording and production
 * The track was recording by Paul Folley at Henson Studios and was mixed by Jean-Marie Harvat at East West Studios, both of which are located in Los Angeles, California. → The track was recorded by Paul Folley at Henson Studios and was mixed by Jean-Marie Harvat at East West Studios, both of which are located in Los Angeles, California.
 * — AARON  &bull; TALK


 * Composition and critical reception
 * "Don't Let Me Down" appears as the eleventh track on the standard edition of Echo, and lasts for a duration of 4:36. -- You cite the Deluxe Edition of the album not the standard edition, thus FN11 does not support the sentence it references.
 * The UK is the standard edition. —  AARON  &bull; TALK
 * Got it. —  Diva    Knockouts   18:20, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Redundant use of "The song"
 * What's redundant about it? It's fine. —  AARON  &bull; TALK
 * You use "The song" too much. Consider rewording. —  Diva    Knockouts   18:20, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
 * — AARON  &bull; TALK   18:29, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Nick Levine for Digital Spy was brief in his review of the song, simply calling it "lovely". -- Levine isn't reviewing just the song, however this is what you convey. Consider rewording.
 * — AARON  &bull; TALK


 * Live performances
 * Redundant use of "called"; how about the second time you use "called" change it to "entitled" or something similar?
 * — AARON  &bull; TALK


 * Tracklisting
 * Again, you cite the deluxe edition of the album instead of the standard edition
 * UK is the standard format. Doesn't matter if the CD itself is standard or deluxe, still appears in the same order. —  AARON  &bull; TALK


 * References
 * Everything looks fine here. Good job.
 * Putting article until issues have been addressed. —   Diva    Knockouts   01:05, 17 March 2013 (UTC)


 * Final Result

—  Diva    Knockouts   20:35, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks. —  AARON  &bull; TALK   20:36, 17 March 2013 (UTC)