Talk:Don't Touch That Dial/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Short description: All mainspace articles should have a short description.
 * Plot section is less than 400 words so it passes MOS:TVPLOT.
 * "... sees a colorful toy helicopter" – it should be established that the world is in black-and-white
 * Remove the commas after "outside the house", "bleeds in color", and "Vision in the series".
 * "he used lighting to try create" "he used lighting to try to create"
 * "for Olsen to try mimic" "for Olsen to try to mimic"
 * Add a comma after "but because of COVID-19 restrictions".
 * "Nielsen Media Research, who measure" "Nielsen Media Research, which measures" (company)
 * Add hyphens between "most watched", "most streamed", and "most viewed".
 * "the top 0.2% or series" – typo?
 * "had 9.3% share" "had a 9.3% share"
 * Be consistent with Comicbook.com or ComicBook.com.
 * "Shannon Miller, Liz" "Miller, Liz Shannon" (#37)
 * Citation #49 is missing an author credit ("Seymour, Mike").
 * Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 02:33, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
 * All done except the short description and the black-and-white clarification in the plot summary, which I'll leave for another editor. —El Millo (talk) 02:51, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
 * A short description is there, automatically added by the infobox. I tried to make a pass at the black and white clarification, but might want a go at it. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 03:04, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks team, I have made the black-and-white bit simpler but am open to trying other wording as well. - adamstom97 (talk) 04:29, 2 September 2021 (UTC)