Talk:Doomsday Blue/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 06:53, 2 June 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 06:42, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

I will be reviewing this, comments will probably be finished in the next 72 hours! Love this song, CROWN THE WITCH!! Arconning (talk) 06:42, 10 June 2024 (UTC)


 * Thank you! I'll probably get to your comments in a few hours. It's around midnight here and I probably need to head to bed... haha. Cheers, and carpe diem! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 07:29, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
 * @Nascar9919 Here are my comments! Hope they can be addressed :) Arconning (talk) 07:34, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * @Nascar9919 Just waiting on earwig, will get back to you and hopefully pass! Arconning (talk) 08:24, 13 June 2024 (UTC)

Prose and MoS

 * Use Template:Use Hiberno-English since the subject of the topic is from Ireland.

Infobox and lead

 * "an electro-metal breakdown",, guessing this is an incomplete quote which is permissible under Manual of Style.
 * 13 October 2023, add comma at the end.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * polarizing, to polarising.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * remarking the song as more unique, who remarked that the song was more unique.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Irish society, add comma at the end.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Irish Eurovision entries, hyperlink to Ireland in the Eurovision Song Contest.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * national culture;, omit semicolon as it's not applicable.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * has drew, replace as it's grammatically incorrect. Example for replacement could be has enjoyed or just drew.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)

Background and composition

 * Sam Matlock and Tylr Rydr., I suggest adding an Oxford comma. Put it after Matlock.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * deception and, pop and jazz, same here.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)

Music video and promotion

 * released on 8 March 2024, add comma at the end.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * "very dark",, remove comma
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * colors, colours.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * signaling, signalling.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * toxic relationship and, add comma at the end.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Pre-Party ES 2024 on 30 March., replace period/full stop with a comma.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)

Critical reception

 * Irish Eurovision entrants., wikilink to Ireland in the Eurovision Song Contest.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Ireland's 2022 entrant, wikilink to Ireland in the Eurovision Song Contest 2022.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * remembered for a long time"., to Ireland's pre-Christian heritage"., put the period inside the quotation marks.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * 2008 Irish Eurovision entrant, wikilink to Ireland in the Eurovision Song Contest 2008.
 * Not done. Already linked in "2008". Let me know if this satisfies things. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Decided to tweak it. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:03, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * over 2,000 people signed, over 2,000 people had signed.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Eurovision, on the basis of, remove comma.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * of [Irish] national culture"., put period/full stop inside.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * also heavily criticized, also heavily criticised.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * intents writing, intentions writing.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * criticized the Catholic Church, criticised the Catholic Church.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)

Eurovision Song Contest

 * 26 January 2024, add comma at the end.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * for Eurovision Song Contest 2024., for the Eurovision Song Contest 2024.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * The edition, This edition.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * which each group, with each group.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * 11 January 2024, add comma at the end.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Ailsha with "Go Tobann"., add comma after Ailsha. Don't need to put the period within the quotes as it is not part of the original title.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Malmö, Sweden, wikilink to Malmö.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * 7 and 9 May, add comma at the end.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * For its Eurovision performance, "it" referring to whom or what? Specify.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Israel's participation, wikilink it entirely instead of the competitor.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * The song was performed in 10th,, The song was performed tenth,
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * I don't even care any more., combine any and more to form anymore, per the original quote.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * is – fuck the EBU., replace the dash with a period/full stop, per the original quote.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Fuck them.", put period outside the quotation marks since it's an incomplete quote. Original quotation is The EBU is not what the Eurovision is. Fuck the EBU, I don’t even care anymore. Fuck them. Refer to this regarding to this bullet and the former two bullets.
 * ✅. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
 * @Arconning: Believe I have addressed all comments. Hope this satisfies all things. Cheers, mate! Nascar9919  (he/him • t • c) 08:02, 13 June 2024 (UTC)

Track listing, Charts, and Release history

 * No issues on prose or MoS. Pass.

Images

 * Images have proper licenses and are relevant to the article.

Refs

 * Reference 4, if there aren't any other available sources use a primary references template. I suggest using Kiribati at the 2020 Summer Olympics as a guide when using this template.
 * References 51 and 52, same as reference 4 guideline.

Spotchecks

 * Reference 2 is okay, per WikiProject Eurovision/Sources.
 * Reference 33 is so-so, per WikiProject Eurovision/Sources. Conditional pass.
 * Reference 38 is so-so, per WikiProject Eurovision/Sources. Conditional pass.
 * Earwig is not working right now, please wait for check.
 * Earwig shows up nothing.
 * Manual check, everything seems alright for now.

Misc

 * No ongoing edit war, broad and focus on the subject of the article, no other issues present.