Talk:Dora E. Angelaki

Comments on style
Of the first 31 sentences in this article, 17 begin with "She" and 6 with her name. The second paragraph in Research and career is the most extreme example. The short sentences make the article choppy. The article would benefit from a copy edit, combining related sentences, varying terminology, and varying sentence structure (such as beginning a sentence with a subordinate clause rather than the subject). Kablammo (talk) 15:34, 16 May 2019 (UTC)