Talk:Double Nickels on the Dime/GA1

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 * "American punk rock trio the Minutemen" - Minutemen or THE Minutemen?
 * Well, "the Minutemen", same as the grammar used in the Pixies article.
 * Although Double Nickels on the Dime did not receive mainstream reviews upon its release, the album now appears on many professional lists of the all-time best rock albums" - the connection between reviews and appearing on these lists is somewhat loose... better to say that it was reviewed [later], and put the list mention in another sentence?
 * Fixed. WesleyDodds (talk) 08:03, 11 June 2008 (UTC)


 * "As with their previous material, the Minutemen ignored conventional song structures and chose to experiment with rhythm, texture and dynamics." - statements like this could do with citations.
 * "Zen Arcade was released at the same time, which had been delayed so that both albums could be released simultaneously" - the "which" is awkward, this sentence could be restructured.
 * Fixed WesleyDodds (talk) 08:00, 11 June 2008 (UTC)

Article/prose is generally quite good, and a great read. giggy (O) 06:44, 7 June 2008 (UTC)