Talk:Douglas Engelbart/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ankit Maity (talk · contribs) 06:21, 10 August 2013 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Short sections and paragraphs are discouraged. In your case, it's the "Personal" and "Death" section. (GA criteria)
 * I worked a bit on that. diff Disavian (talk) 02:10, 12 August 2013 (UTC)
 * The lead should adequately summarize the content of the article. (GA criteria)
 * I worked to make it better summarize the article. If it's missing anything obvious, let me knowaye diff Disavian (talk) 03:04, 12 August 2013 (UTC)
 * There should not be anything in the lead not mentioned in the rest of the article. (GA criteria)
 * As far as I can tell, everything in the lead is contained in the article. Let me know if I'm missing something specific. Disavian (talk) 03:04, 12 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Biographies require.
 * The persondata template is present and has data. Disavian (talk) 02:19, 12 August 2013 (UTC)
 * The review is thus on hold. -- Ankit Maity Talk Contribs 07:47, 10 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Thank you for reviewing the article. :) I'll see what I can do... Disavian (talk) 02:10, 12 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Complete the task. Then, passed. -- Ankit Maity Talk Contribs 09:12, 17 August 2013 (UTC)
 * ✅ -- Ankit Maity Talk Contribs 12:32, 2 September 2013 (UTC)
 * As far as I can tell, everything in the lead is contained in the article. Let me know if I'm missing something specific. Disavian (talk) 03:04, 12 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Biographies require.
 * The persondata template is present and has data. Disavian (talk) 02:19, 12 August 2013 (UTC)
 * The review is thus on hold. -- Ankit Maity Talk Contribs 07:47, 10 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Thank you for reviewing the article. :) I'll see what I can do... Disavian (talk) 02:10, 12 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Complete the task. Then, passed. -- Ankit Maity Talk Contribs 09:12, 17 August 2013 (UTC)
 * ✅ -- Ankit Maity Talk Contribs 12:32, 2 September 2013 (UTC)