Talk:Drache-class ironclad/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 02:06, 1 November 2016 (UTC)

Will come back shortly. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 02:06, 1 November 2016 (UTC)


 * Section 1; sentence 1; "...launch of the French Gloire, the first ironclad warship", first ironclad of the world or Europe or France, mention that clearly.
 * Done
 * Section 1; Better mention who is "Kaiser Franz Josef I", something like "Emperor of Austria" etc.
 * Added
 * Section 1.1; para 1; beam measured 13.94 meters (45 ft 9 in); but in the infobox it is 14 m (45 ft 11 in)
 * A legacy of when the article was based on Silverstone's less precise work - good catch.
 * Section 1.1; para 1; they displaced 2,824 long tons (2,869 t) at normal load, and 3,110 long tons (3,160 t) at deep load; but in the infobox it is 2,779 long tons (2,824 t)
 * Probably the same as above
 * Is it possible to add the information about the later guns that were installed in 1867, in the infobox.
 * Added
 * Section 1.14; para 3; The frigates broadside ironclads; this looks a bit confusing. I think it is to "The frigates were broadside ironclads".
 * Yeah, the "were" was missing.
 * All the three images lack dates on their description pages. Please add approx. dates as I suggested on Talk:Kaiser Max-class ironclad (1862)/GA1.
 * Added to all three
 * Better to link "Prussia" and "Italy" on their first mention.
 * Linked Prussia, but Italy is already linked in the design section.
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 08:30, 1 November 2016 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 02:16, 3 November 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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