Talk:Dracula's Daughter/GA1

GA Review
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OK, beginning notes...Cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 04:52, 20 December 2008 (UTC)

Be careful of repetition. I will massage the prose as I go and note things which are not straightforward fixes. Please correct me if I inadvertently change the meaning. Cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 04:52, 20 December 2008 (UTC)


 * Minor note and easy to address, make a stub for this - Remember Last Night? - before it goes to FAC one day. Cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 04:59, 20 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Sutherland had as little interest in Dracula's Daughter as Whale and soon left the studio and Hillyer came on to direct. - refs should go after a comma or stop, does this ref cover the whole sentence? If not, make a comma there.
 * At least one critic believes that... - a little weaselly, so may as well name the critic if possible. Not a deal breaker for GA but prudent for FAC.
 * Shooting on Dracula's Daughter began on February 4, 1936, rushed into production before Fort had completed the script[16] because of a... - again, refs need to come at the end of some form of punctuation.

Overall, great work, just tweak the things above and we're there. Cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 05:13, 20 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Critic's name added. I've inserted commas as you requested and will look for material for "Remember Last Night?" Otto4711 (talk) 16:01, 20 December 2008 (UTC)


 * PS (more for FAC rather than GA necessarily). Gloria Holden feared typecasting with the role; did it pan out this way? Any personal recollections may be good. My mother has a stack of golden years bio book etc so I will have a look. Cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 07:05, 20 December 2008 (UTC)