Talk:Dragon Quest X/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cognissonance (talk · contribs) 01:14, 22 October 2016 (UTC)

And then there were two... Cognissonance (talk) 01:14, 22 October 2016 (UTC)

Synopsis

 * "the protagonist forges a friendship bond" — Improve prose: "the protagonist forges a friendship".

Development

 * I suggest illustrating the return of veteran developers, using images of art designer Akira Toriyama and composer Koichi Sugiyama. Another image depicting the Squenix game engine could also be useful.
 * CGI — Link to Computer-generated imagery
 * "¥1200 and ¥2000, then set it at ¥1000" — Parenthesize the $ equivalent for each.

Overall

 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall: You have made a near flawless article. Congrats! You're my first immediate pass.
 * Pass/Fail:
 * And you always remember your first... Cognissonance (talk) 04:36, 22 October 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall: You have made a near flawless article. Congrats! You're my first immediate pass.
 * Pass/Fail:
 * And you always remember your first... Cognissonance (talk) 04:36, 22 October 2016 (UTC)
 * And you always remember your first... Cognissonance (talk) 04:36, 22 October 2016 (UTC)