Talk:Dralístico/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ceranthor (talk · contribs) 17:17, 6 March 2019 (UTC)

Will review this (for the WikiCup).  ceran  thor 17:17, 6 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Hoping to get this in the next day or so.  ceran  thor 13:21, 12 March 2019 (UTC)

Prose

 * Lead
 * "Carlos Muñoz, better known as Místico, is a Mexican second-generation" - "second-generation" meaning what here?
 * That his father was also a professional wrestler. MPJ-DK (talk) 22:26, 14 March 2019 (UTC)


 * "(a "Face", someone who portrays the good guys in wrestling)" - perhaps written in an informal tone; also I think it's best to avoid idioms like "good guys"
 * Better?? MPJ-DK (talk) 22:26, 14 March 2019 (UTC)


 * "He is a former two times" - should be two-time
 * Fixed MPJ-DK (talk) 22:26, 14 March 2019 (UTC)


 * " His older brother" - seems like you mean Mistico, but you should clarify that you mean Mistico's brother and not his father's brother
 * Fixed MPJ-DK (talk) 22:26, 14 March 2019 (UTC)


 * "He has also wrestled both in Japan and Europe through CMLL's partnerships with other promotions as well as on the Mexican independent circuit." - with other promotions... such as? Don't need "also" *and* "both" - that's redundant
 * Fixed MPJ-DK (talk) 22:26, 14 March 2019 (UTC)


 * Professional wrestling career
 * "uncles Franco Columbo, Pit bull I, and Pit bull II" - both Pit bulls are his uncles?
 * Yes MPJ-DK (talk) 22:26, 14 March 2019 (UTC)


 * "Lee wrestled mainly in six-man tag team matches with and against his stablemates,[9][10]" - stablemates? Don't know what that means
 * Other people of the stable (group) that he was a member of. MPJ-DK (talk) 22:26, 14 March 2019 (UTC)


 * "before being put in his first major program the following April," - too passive. What about "entering" instead? And then tweaking the rest of the sentence to reflect that
 * Fixed I think MPJ-DK (talk) 22:26, 14 March 2019 (UTC)


 * "who went on to win the tournament.[16][17]" - why not just say "who won the tournament" and cut out "went on"
 * Fixed MPJ-DK (talk) 22:26, 14 March 2019 (UTC)


 * "qualified for the 2017 Universal Championship tournament.In the first round " - missing a space :)
 * Fixed MPJ-DK (talk) 22:26, 14 March 2019 (UTC)


 * " Místico was paired up with Negro Casas" - I think just "paired" is fine, no need for the "up"
 * Fixed MPJ-DK (talk) 22:26, 14 March 2019 (UTC)


 * Personal life
 * "His younger brother made his debut in November 2013 as the second Dragon Lee.[93][94] " - which "His" are you referring to here?
 * Fixed MPJ-DK (talk) 22:26, 14 March 2019 (UTC)


 * "Pit Bull I and Pit Bull II," - earlier you didn't capitalize these; be consistent throughout the article
 * Fixed MPJ-DK (talk) 22:26, 14 March 2019 (UTC)

Images

 * File:CMLL November 30 Mistico posing.jpg - checks out
 * File:Mistico-2013.jpg - seems to check out
 * File:Místico II 2017.jpg - checks out
 * File:Carisico and Mistico.jpg - checks out; pushing the title for the other promotions section
 * Looks okay to me, what browser are you using? It will not be a problem as soon as this section gets longer with future accomplishments. MPJ-DK (talk) 22:26, 14 March 2019 (UTC)


 * File:CMLL November 30 Mistico dive on Euforia.jpg - checks out; however, formatting-wise it looks like it's encroaching into the next section
 * It does brige the next section, not sure if its better to use a "clear" template with a text gap or leave it as is. MPJ-DK (talk) 22:26, 14 March 2019 (UTC)


 * File:Mistico-Volador-Sombra.jpg - seems to check out

Thanks for your patience.  ceran  thor 13:07, 14 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your review, I will provide answers for reliability in a moment. MPJ-DK (talk) 22:26, 14 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Sorry yet again for the delay. Reading thru today and hoping to pass this by the end of the day. Will post any more pressing comments if I see anything that needs fixing.  ceran  thor 12:43, 21 March 2019 (UTC)