Talk:Dreamlover (song)/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 00:25, 14 July 2011 (UTC)


 * Infobox
 * No issues


 * Lead
 * "...becoming Carey's seventh chart topper in the Billboard Hot 100..." - Change "in" to "on"
 * "...including The Arsenio Hall Show in September..." - Specify year


 * Background
 * No issues


 * Recording
 * Try to use more than one reference in this section


 * Music and lyrics
 * "...with Pop music and R&B influences." - Change "pop music" to "pop"; needs reference
 * "Carey's vocals in the song span over two octaves, from the note of an A3 to the high note of a C5." - Needs reference
 * "The song was written by Carey and Hall during the course of one evening." - Needs reference


 * Critical reception
 * No issues


 * Chart performance
 * "It spent twenty-six weeks in the top forty and was ranked number eight on the Hot 100 1993 Year-End Charts and twenty on the Decade-End Charts." - Needs reference


 * Music video and remixes
 * No issues


 * Live performances
 * "The song was sung live on The Arsenio Hall Show with "Hero" as a two-piece set-list." - Needs reference
 * "As a promotion for her seventh studio effort..." - Unclear terminology
 * "In the Daydream World Tour..." - Add comma at end


 * Track listings
 * No issues


 * Credits and personnel
 * No issues


 * Charts
 * No issues


 * See also
 * No issues


 * References
 * Reference 3 - The "work=" parameter is not needed because it italicizes the text
 * Reference 8 - I have seen the publisher being Sony/ATV Music Publishing on other GA music articles
 * Reference 12 - The "work=" parameter is not needed


 * Works cited
 * No issues


 * External links
 * No issues

After reviewing this article thoroughly, I have decided to put the article on hold at this time. There are many spots where there are specific facts without cited references. Also, there a few minor mistakes affecting the prose quality of this article. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or debate the ones you believe do not affect GA status. - Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 18:18, 14 July 2011 (UTC)
 * OVERALL REVIEW
 * Sorry for not replying sooner. I didn't see your comments on my watchlist, so I didn't know you responded on my talk page. Anyway, since all issues have been addressed, I feel confident to put this article in good article status. Congratulations and keep up the good work you do. - Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 01:35, 16 July 2011 (UTC)

Has there ever been a notion on the keyboard riff, which is presented in the intro and goes through the song, resembles quite a lot the intro of The Shadows' instrumental piece Wonderful Land ? Noseball (talk) 09:23, 8 March 2015 (UTC)