Talk:Drew Carey's Improv-A-Ganza/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:56, 6 May 2018 (UTC)

Will take on the review of this GAN show. MWright96 (talk) 17:56, 6 May 2018 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * Game Show Network should have its acroynms in parentheses the first time it is mentioned
 * ✅. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 22:44, 6 May 2018 (UTC)


 * "the program was hosted by Drew Carey," - try series for variety
 * ✅. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 22:44, 6 May 2018 (UTC)


 * In the lead, you could include the reception the program received from the press
 * ✅. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 22:44, 6 May 2018 (UTC)

Format

 * "in front of a live audience using audience suggestions and audience participation" - can you try and reword this section of text so that the word audidence is only mentioned once?
 * ✅. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 22:44, 6 May 2018 (UTC)


 * "Similar to Whose Line Is It Anyway? and Drew Carey's Green Screen Show, the show" - change the text in bold toprogram to avoid close reptition
 * ✅. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 22:44, 6 May 2018 (UTC)


 * "Unlike Whose Line, the show is filmed" - series
 * ✅. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 22:44, 6 May 2018 (UTC)


 * Wikilink Paradise, Nevada
 * ✅. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 22:44, 6 May 2018 (UTC)


 * "One winner was selected each day for each episode aired." - per day
 * ✅. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 22:44, 6 May 2018 (UTC)


 * How did they select the winners for the viewership contest? Was it through a random draw?
 * Yes, ✅. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 22:44, 6 May 2018 (UTC)

Production

 * "On February 16, GSN announced that the show would premiere on alongside Love Triangle." - remove "on"
 * . --Bcschneider53 (talk) 22:44, 6 May 2018 (UTC)


 * "On August 25, 2011, Carey posted on his Twitter account that GSN would not be ordering any more episodes of Improv-A-Ganza, announcing that the show was effectively cancelled." - try On August 25, 2011, Carey announced through Twitter that the show was effectively cancelled as GSN would not be ordering any more episodes of Improv-A-Ganza.
 * ✅. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 22:44, 6 May 2018 (UTC)

Reception

 * Whatculture.com is spelt as WhatCulture.com
 * ✅. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 22:44, 6 May 2018 (UTC)