Talk:Drive (Miley Cyrus song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Prism (talk · contribs) 23:56, 4 March 2014 (UTC)

Hi! My review for "Drive" will start shortly. Prism  △  23:56, 4 March 2014 (UTC)

Links

 * Disambiguation: None, as usual!
 * External: You need to correct one link's address as it changes the sub-domain.
 * I'm not sure why it says that, because when I clicked on the link it pulled up the article and the URL didn't change. Would this be alright to leave as-is?
 * Sure. Prism   △  20:54, 5 March 2014 (UTC)

Prose

 * Lead
 * Looks good, but could you add 'contemporary' before music critics?


 * Background and composition
 * The introduction about the album may be a problem in the future, considering you may want to make Bangerz a WP:GT. However, Lotus has one of those intros in every article and nobody asked to remove it, so there's no problem for now.
 * I've heard mixed things about this particular paragraph for Bangerz; some editors seem to think that it's better off only in the album article, although I think that it gives some background information that is important for setting up why the song exists in the first place.


 * The rest is fine, although I hope you can work on it a bit considering you get reliable sources.
 * I hope I've addressed your concerns with the fixes you've highlighted above; much of this section cited by Billboard, the liner notes, and (now) MTV.


 * Critical reception
 * "on the album"' she further commented that the song" – missing semi-colon


 * "while also suggesting that its chorus was too similar to that of "Wrecking Ball"" – I don't think this interpretation is very accurate, he is probably just saying the chorus is missing the impact of that of Wrecking Ball.


 * Live performances
 * Since I gave you the idea of having the Cite episode template, you can elaborate on how she was dressed during the performance, what she did, the lights, etc. I saw the special and there isn't a lot to talk about during that performance but surely something is. If there are sources, do the same for the MTV Unplugged performance please.


 * Credits and personnel // Charts
 * Everything is alright.

Review history and summary

 * March 5, 2014: Full review. Outcome (passing). Prism   △  12:34, 5 March 2014 (UTC)