Talk:Driving Emotion Type-S/GA1

GA review 1

 * "It was Square's first release for the Sony PlayStation 2 console, seeing a Japanese release on 30 March 2000." - "seeing a release" is awkward....try rewording a bit (without going back to "released on" after the "first release..." as that'd sound worse!
 * The gameplay image section caption could be better...talk about what you can see, etc
 * Same in reception section
 * GameZone, IGN, and the like don't need italics (in refs)
 * "The game features a realistic physics engine which mimicks the actual physics of cars. " - could do with a ref
 * I must commend the reception section, overall it's one of the best I've seen in a long time (and I've been pleading for more detail in them!)
 * "more toward "car fanatics" than "race fans"" - you sure? I'd have classed the two together (or close)..