Talk:Droitwich Spa Lido

This isn't really in a formal tone, when I started reading it in my head, it sounded like an advertisement.

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This certainly reads with  a very  informal  tone, like a letter to  a friend. Almost certainly  created in  good faith, it  nevertheless needs a clean up, some references, and some photos.--Kudpung (talk) 16:03, 11 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Tried my hand at a bit of cleaning-up, no harm intended, just aiming towards more of an encyclopedic tone.
 * One sentence still bothers me:
 * "the water still contains the salt for that is the reason for the existence of Droitwich Spa itself"
 * Instead I would like to read something like: "Of course the newly reopened Lido still uses the water from the natural sources which made Droitwich Spa famous". But I can't put it in there in good faith because I haven't checked whether this is correct. --BjKa (talk) 12:02, 11 April 2011 (UTC)

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