Talk:Drusus Julius Caesar/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 04:52, 24 July 2017 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  04:52, 24 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Sorry for taking so long, I totally forgot about this. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  19:08, 23 August 2017 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
 * 1
 * 1.a ✅
 * 1.b ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a ✅
 * 2.b ✅
 * 2.c ✅
 * 2.d ✅
 * 3
 * 3.a ✅
 * 3.b ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a ✅
 * 5
 * 5.a ✅
 * 6
 * 6.a ✅
 * 6.b ✅
 * No DAB links
 * No Dead links
 * Images appropriately licensed ✅
 * You have one sentence that doesn't have a citation at the end, but I expect that is just a mistake and can be easily fixed. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  19:08, 23 August 2017 (UTC)

Prose Suggestions

 * "and he assumed all his offices at the same age as him." perhaps "and he assumed all of his offices at the same age Germanicus was when he took those offices".
 * "it should have reached Rome by 3 or 4 October." perhaps "would have" or "is likely to have", as its slightly more encyclopedic.
 * that is all my suggestions. I'll pass the article after you deal with the one sentence lacking a citation, and leave you to deal with if you want to change the two things I've mentioned above. Sorry again for taking so long. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  20:54, 28 August 2017 (UTC)
 * It's fine. I've been away from Wikipedia for the last couple weeks anyway, but I should have time tonight. SpartaN (talk) 18:03, 29 August 2017 (UTC)
 * You've probably already got the notification, but I forgot to mention it here as well: I referenced the last sentence, so I've passed it. -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  18:06, 29 August 2017 (UTC)