Talk:Dual circadian oscillator model

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Nice work on your draft. A few things that need fixing
 * Everything in the article should be supported by an inline reference. The reference needs to be placed after the statement it supports, and needs to be in the same paragraph as the statement. One reference at the end of a paragraph is OK if it supports everything in the paragraph, but you can't have content after the final reference, because there's no way for readers to know which source it's supported by.
 * You shouldn't repeat the article title in the section headers. So rather than "Evidence for dual oscillators in Drosophila melanogoster" you should go with something simpler like ""Evidence from Drosophila melanogoster". Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:17, 18 April 2019 (UTC)