Talk:Duffy (Casualty)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 11:45, 5 April 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 11:45, 5 April 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Instead of using "DISPLAYTITLE", might I suggest using an italic dab?✅
 * With that in mind, the infobox and image's non-free use rationale looks good.
 * "break down" "breakdown"✅
 * "wont they" "won't they" (both uses)✅

Casting

 * This section looks good.

Development

 * Here and in other sections, each sentence with a quote needs a source per WP:QUOTE.✅
 * Won't tackle serial commas in this review per WP:ENGVAR.
 * "move the United States" "move to the United States"✅
 * "take Peter into work" "take Peter to work"✅
 * "Andrew was killed-off" "Andrew was killed off"✅
 * Add a comma between "She explained 'Duffy'".✅
 * "return as traditional return" doesn't sound right.✅
 * Same issue with "locations spots".✅
 * "heart-attack" "heart attack"✅
 * Add a comma after "Upon her return".✅
 * Remove the comma after "midwife".✅
 * "shared fifteen year" "shared a fifteen-year"✅
 * "thirty year love story" "thirty-year love story"✅
 * The phrase "stag do took place" doesn't sound right either.✅
 * In #Depression_and_dementia, add a comma after "as a result".✅

Reception

 * This section looks good.