Talk:Dugway sheep incident/GA1

GA Review
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--  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 17:31, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Hello there. Thanks for the prompt review. It looks like the issues you've raised should be pretty easy to address. When I have a bit more time they shouldn't take more than a half hour or so. Thanks again. :-)--IvoShandor (talk) 18:25, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
 * OK, ref #5 does cover that blurb. Should I add some more footnotes?--IvoShandor (talk) 05:16, 10 October 2008 (UTC)
 * I altered the POV statement to read "One explanation . . ." --IvoShandor (talk) 05:18, 10 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Is there anything else that you see? --IvoShandor (talk) 05:18, 10 October 2008 (UTC)


 * Dates! Ahhhh!! Sorry, stupid MOS. :-) Also on the templates, honestly I hate using those templates, I can type a citation much faster than I can insert the relevant info into the templates. What to do about those dead links though? Internet Archive?--IvoShandor (talk) 05:20, 10 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Well, according to here, its not necessarily required to properly "format" references, as long as they are "consistent" throughout the article. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 18:59, 10 October 2008 (UTC)
 * All the dates should be delinked now. I found replacement links for two of those dead links, the Indian Country article I couldn't find a new link for, but it does have the Lexis Nexis link, which requires access, usually through a local library, so that should do.--IvoShandor (talk) 05:52, 10 October 2008 (UTC)
 * I spoke too soon, a bit of searching turned up a freely accessible link to the article. I will leave the Lexis Nexis link as well, in case another link death occurs. :-)--IvoShandor (talk) 07:20, 10 October 2008 (UTC)
 * I also made a few other minor improvements, some minor copy editing, added a category, added some more external links, including a Time Magazine article from 1968 and a link to a 1998 NPR report on the incident.--IvoShandor (talk) 07:53, 10 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Excellent, after reading the article once more, I have gone off and passed the article. Though, it would be a good idea if a little more explanation was given in the Background section, particularly part of this sentence ---> "is a closely guarded secret". Congratulations. If you feel that this review is in error, feel free to take it to a GA review. Thank you to IvoShandor who worked hard to bring it to this status, and congratulations. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 18:59, 10 October 2008 (UTC)